Nabella's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Take a Brake]

This is a really good 1 second. His little, "yes" before falling was very good. I also like how his legs and arms did a little bounce after his main body hit the ground. A lot of action was packed into this.

Despite that though, I don't see how this movie would be any different from posting it as a gif in the Art Portal. Was mp4 really the only way you could export this animation?

Andres0088V responds:

I just saw the option to upload gif in art XD

[Fiyah Boru]

This is nice, but also very short! I feel like a soundless looping test animation like this would fit better as a gif in the Art Portal or in a compilation of other animations you've made.

While the lineart of the Flash brush is good, the animation of the character's main body appears stiff without the use of some easing in your motion tweens or incorporation of more frame-by-frame stuff.

Still nice for a first try, though. Good luck with your future Flash attempts.

Superbuchi responds:

I really appreciate your review, and I think all of your points were spot on. I think I'm going to post longer animations that I've already done while I work on something longer with sound. I'll try to use more frame by frame there and I'll put more easing in the tweens I do use. Once again, thank you for the review :)

[Spider]

That was a pretty smooth headbutt.

Nice job!

[Eggs For You]

mmm thx bby

Not the highest quality out there, but I like it's shitposty nature. Sound really does wonders, because otherwise, this would stink.

B̶u̶t̶ ̶w̶h̶a̶t̶ ̶I̶ ̶r̶e̶a̶l̶l̶y̶ ̶m̶e̶a̶n̶ ̶i̶s̶ ̶t̶h̶a̶t̶ ̶y̶o̶u̶ ̶w̶o̶u̶l̶d̶n̶'̶t̶ ̶b̶e̶ ̶a̶b̶l̶e̶ ̶t̶o̶ ̶c̶o̶m̶m̶u̶n̶i̶c̶a̶t̶e̶ ̶y̶o̶u̶r̶ ̶g̶a̶g̶ ̶a̶s̶ ̶w̶e̶l̶l̶ ̶w̶i̶t̶h̶o̶u̶t̶ ̶i̶t̶.̶ ̶T̶i̶m̶i̶n̶g̶ ̶p̶l̶a̶y̶s̶ ̶a̶ ̶p̶a̶r̶t̶ ̶i̶n̶ ̶i̶t̶,̶ ̶t̶o̶o̶,̶ ̶I̶ ̶g̶u̶e̶s̶s̶.̶

[My girlfriend's family is obsessed with PewDiePie]

Dude, I have a weakness for sharp pixel aesthetic mixed with real images of things. Gives me MSPA or early flash vibes.

Writing and timing really carried this. Good job!

diegoastier responds:

Thank you!