This looks pretty damn solid to me. If anything is needed, I would say you'd need an extra separate page with loose drawings of the character acting using their full body.
I've never worked at a studio, however, so take what I say with a grain of salt.
Me when life is worth living and I have opportunities and a clear path to follow that will guarantee me a happy life and enough money to live comfortably and do things like go out with friends and and and uh and
Wow, nice gut.
Oh geez, it's anotha' one of these guys.
Being able to hangout in a physical space with friends must be nice.
17 blind comics left...
I follow you out of morbid curiosity and you always find a way to make me feel uneasy.
Good good, stay awhile.. it’ll get worse heheh
ITS OKAY HOMAH
Now draw them hanging out with their best friend Linux.
Sadly GNU-plus-Linux-tan has a restraining order (´人｀)
Haven't I seen this somewhere before?
LOOK ON MY WORKS, YE' MIGHTY, AND DESPAIR!!
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Rural grassy nowhere.
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Eileen 
FROLICKING 
Daisy Alt 
ghost 
The gang hanging outtt 
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あほ! あほ!! あほ!!! 
Dont tell Carl 
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